A CANDLE FOR THE DEAD

   

A CANDLE FOR THE DEAD

Lost precious things,

and broken strings.

You just couldn't break the spell of dying.

Dead person.

Dead emotion.

Mourning for the lost love and devotion.

Time has passed.

But you're still haunted by the ghosts of the past.

Now you light a candle and wish, 

that they may all rest in peace.

Reviews

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Simply beautiful way of describing how hard is to let go of those who have passed away. This is simply lovely. N.

[Sally Hope]

This poem is so hauntingly beautiful! This should be read someplace quiet, and thought over, because there's so much in-between the lines. And the art ... Great job! Keep writing, keep inspiring :)

[hanir]

Thank you for taking time to read.
😊

[Urja Gokani]

well the art is good and the poem is amazing too keep it up !!!

[hanir]

Thanks a lot. 😊

[alifeacoustic]

A wonderful depiction of the painting and the thoughts that lie behind the image.

[hanir]

Thanks for the review.
😊

[alifeacoustic]

You're welcome :)