MESSAGE IN AN EMPTY BOTTLE

MESSAGE IN AN EMPTY BOTTLE

A Poem by hanir

"MESSAGE IN AN EMPTY BOTTLE"
She's been floating in the sea of mystery.
Trying to find answers to the most enigmatic questions.
Finding meaning to some meaningless situations.
And trying to seek for an affirmative message..
When apparently, there is none.

© 2015 hanir


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Love it, when reading your words, my mind went crazy trying to figure out what happened before the bottle was sent adrift. Like it a lot! 8-) Thanks for sharing

Posted 9 Years Ago


hanir

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the review. 😊
inspiring. lovely. a bit heartbreaking. totally worth reading. thanks for the words

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow! This is something amazing! *_*

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow...this resonates, there is no one answer yet the seeking of epiphanies are deeply embedded within for some on this journey...beautifully voiced! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


lovely poem amazingly written keep it up !!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Just love the poem.. thoughtful words touched my soul.really beautiful :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Hanir, This is an exceptional piece. Very moving, I also love the image.

Makes me wonder what hopes and wishes were dreamt inside before cast to sea. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful descriptions my friend... love the imagery in this write. Trying to find answers seems to be what life is all about... some of us do a better job than others at finding those answers.

Posted 9 Years Ago


hanir

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the review. 😊
Nice, imagery is on point and I really like its simplicity..

Posted 9 Years Ago


True...sometimes the message is no message at all. The imagery is great and so is the metaphor. I liked it. Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


hanir

9 Years Ago

So glad you liked it. Thank you. 😊

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