STOLEN SHOT

STOLEN SHOT 

Things unfold right before your eyes. 

Sometimes abruptly. 

Unexpectedly. 

And there you are unprepared. 

Caught in an unforeseen situation wherein you wish to run away. 

You wish to hide. 

 But it's kinda too late already.

Reviews

[JulianaSun]

Hahaha, I can´t even remember how many times I wanted to run away and hide my head in the sand. I love the way you capture the essence of emotions and feelings. Your poems are like tiny bottles of wisdom ad truth and beauty. You read them and you see yourself reflected in other people, and understand that you are not the only one who views the world in a certain way.

[hanir]

Thank you! Your review is more accurately wonderful than my post! Lol 😅

[Tomoe Tellez]

Been in this situation far too much. I felt every line.

[hanir]

Thank you for reviewing!

[Kaliope]

It's always scary to get caught without our masks or armor. But being vulnerable is being human and thankfully doesn't always end in pain.

Wonderful poem, thank you for sharing!

[hanir]

Vulnerable indeed! Thanks for the review.

[Misery]

Your poem reminds me of being born. Suddenly we are thrust into this life, an unforeseen situation, and it is too late to turn back. A wonderful bit of inspiration, dear poet.

"Not all who wander are lost..."

[hanir]

Thank you for taking time to read my piece. ☺

[Misery]

You are welcome, dear poet.
Thank you for sharing your inspiration.

[terry smith]

nice!! I know the feeling!

[hanir]

Oh. Thanks.