MOONLIGHT SONATA

MOONLIGHT SONATA

It was a dark, magical night. 

We were under the same moonlight. 

You held my hand. 

For once I felt like I belonged. 

It was like a celestial attraction. 

A cosmic phenomenon. 

But you let go so soon. 

It was brief. 

Like a brief lunar eclipse. 

Now I'm left nostalgic.. 

listening to this soulful musical piece 

Of love and loneliness.

Reviews

[Benson Osuji]

wow its wonderful how you make up such great write ups

[hanir]

Life is still marvelous..even in the midst of melancholy.
Thanks for the review. ☺

[Benson Osuji]

No problem its was my pleasure to read such golden write up

[JulianaSun]

Wow, Moonlight Sonata is like one of my favorite classical piece ( Beethoven might be a genius, but Vivaldi is still my all time favorite. " Four Seasons" rock:) ) I even wrote once a poem while listening to it.
In fact, I can hear it in my mind while reading your poem. The verses fit its notes so perfectly. I love it. Delicate and romantic and nostalgic...like moonlight sonata

[hanir]

That soulful musical piece can define and unleash those sheltered emotions. And push you to write.read moreThat soulful musical piece can define and unleash those sheltered emotions. And push you to write.
Thanks for reviewing.
Oh and I'd love to read that poem you wrote.

[Writergirl]

I love how this is written and the words you chose. Beautiful poem!

[hanir]

Thanks for the review! 😊

[Sultrysoul]

This imagery is so beautiful. I love this piece.

[hanir]

Thank you for taking time to read my piece. 😊

[Sultrysoul]

My pleasure my friend. It was beautifully written.

[youngkingkwan]

I thoroughly enjoyed this through and through. Titles can be confusing without understanding the piece. This one though, I agree with JoeM. This piece speaks every word it's meant to.

[hanir]

Thank you for your appreciation.

[JoeM]

You nailed it, girl. I wish it had been my hand.

[hanir]

Thanks for the review. 😊

[Edis Radoncic]

i really like how short the poem is and how much meaning it carries. keep up the good work!

[hanir]

Thank you! ☺

[A. Amos]

Very well written my friend...looking forward to read more of your work...

[hanir]

Thank you!

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome...

[imagwriteine]

Wow the last two lines really got my brain playing 'Moonlight Sonata' in my head lol.

Somehow when reading the poem there's a musical sense to the words that it is like a song, and it perfectly coheres with your title which I think is really good.

I like your comparison of love with 'Celestial attraction', a strong force among two entities, that perfectly conveys the rush of affection that courses through two people when they're in love.

All in all, short and precise, great Job.

[hanir]

Thank you! I was actually listening to that soulful musical piece Moonlight Sonata when I wrote this. 😁

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and perfect poetry.
"Like a brief lunar eclipse.
Now I'm left nostalgic..
listening to this soulful musical piece
Of love and loneliness."
Your good words take me to better place and thoughts. Good to meet you. I hope to read more of your outstanding work.
Coyote

[hanir]

Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.