MOONLIGHT SONATA

MOONLIGHT SONATA

It was a dark, magical night. 

We were under the same moonlight. 

You held my hand. 

For once I felt like I belonged. 

It was like a celestial attraction. 

A cosmic phenomenon. 

But you let go so soon. 

It was brief. 

Like a brief lunar eclipse. 

Now I'm left nostalgic.. 

listening to this soulful musical piece 

Of love and loneliness.

Reviews

[Jordan Smith]

This is a really great poem! I really enjoyed reading this. Great work!

[Autumn Lyric]

Love the title. I can envision the enclosed hands parting slowly too soon and it becomes a memory of nostalgia when a type of music is played; relived in the moment of the "soulful" sounds...the interpretation of excitement is mixed with a longing that can be felt in your word choice. Beautiful thoughts.

[Owen Aldin]

If I had a penny for every time I felt like this!

Really Good!

[hanir]

Thanks for reviewing. 😊

[Ruth]

How beautiful, even in the depths of loneliness, the heart can hear music, lovely!

[hanir]

Thanks for the review!😊

[Connie]

simple but beautiful with so much feeling

[hanir]

Thanks! 😊

[Wordzika]

Wow it is such a melodic piece. I was for a moment. Really beautiful!

[hanir]

Thanks for reviewing. 😊

[SleeplessVolcano]

BeautiFul.....nostalgic words.....nostalgic music....drove me to my keyboard but I forgot some notes.....pulled out the sheet music....but my lazy fingers rebelled.......tx for bringing some music to my day....:)

[hanir]

Glad to hear that. 😊
Thanks for reviewing..

[scarlynn]

Short sweet, nostalgaic. This is a beautiful piece, and it's timeless. Lovely :)

[hanir]

Thank you for taking time to read and give such a nice review on my piece. I appreciate it deeply. 😊

[Emily Ring]

This is a lovely, bittersweet poem. I love the title. It has a way wrapping itself around the piece and putting it into perspective. Very nice.

[hanir]

Thanks for your lovely review! 😊
I deeply appreciate it.

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we must know love to be lonely when it is no longer there in it's physical state...still, we can hold on to it and recall it's brevity when required...love the reference to music and the photo as well...enjoyed it very much...

[hanir]

Such a clever review. Thank you. And yes I took that photo. Blood moon, total lunar eclipse last April. 😊

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Great camera work...and you are welcome, of course :)