DARKNESS

DARKNESS

A Poem by hanir

"DARKNESS"
It is usually perceived as a realm of the unknown and uncertainties.
Pain and distress.
Seclusion and emptiness.
But what not every human eye can see,
Is that in darkness, there is beauty..
There is light.

© 2015 hanir


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"Is that in darkness, there is beauty..There is light"....I totally agree with this. How refreshing to find another writer who I can relate to. Excellent writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I always feel more alert and capable in the dark....it is nothing to be feared...it is something to be embraced. thanks for bringing out that aspect of darkness. ( : O )

Posted 9 Years Ago


hanir

9 Years Ago

Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
One pinprick of light exposes the darkness, makes it stand out, gives us
hope and shows us the beauty of darkness.
I enjoyed the read, these were just my thoughts. Well Done 8-)


Posted 9 Years Ago


hanir

9 Years Ago

Thank you for taking time to read.
Indeed! I tell everyone that is where we see our true selves without the distractions of what the light shows us with its shades and shadows. Love this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hanir

9 Years Ago

Thank you for taking time to read. Deeply appreciAte it. 😊
this is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood! keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hanir

9 Years Ago

I will.
thank you so much. 😊
And in silence a symphony ...Nice poem Hanir, I like that I get a different point of view when I read you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


hanir

9 Years Ago

So glad to hear that!
Thank you. 😊
I love the dark and find it to be soothing and inspiring... there is nothing quite like quelling the senses to become more in touch with life...thanks for standing up for darkness; this is a great read :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


like they said: "without the darkness, the stars can't shine."

wonderful job Ms. Hanir :)
never a nonsense piece. ^_______^

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hanir

9 Years Ago

Oh really?! Im already close to the verge of believing your reviews on me! 😁 Hehe.
Salamat.. read more
binibiningmaya

9 Years Ago

Hehe believe me, you really do have a creative mind. :)
Walang anuman Ms. Hanir :)
Wow, this was amazing!
I love it, great job ❣

Posted 9 Years Ago


hanir

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the review 😊
Amy R

9 Years Ago

😊 ur welcome
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Indeed, dear poet :) stars shine brightly in the night. Enjoyed your work!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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