OBLIVION

OBLIVION

A Poem by hanir



OBLIVION 
No matter how much you try to make yourself believe that everything's alright... 
Many times you would still get reminded of the emptiness inside. 
You've been missing something. 
You wish to have it back. 
Absolute fact is there are things that you can have back. 
But there are things that are really gone. 
And all you could ever wait is for oblivion to come.

© 2015 hanir


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I love the short snappy style. Its a lot of emotion packed into a short space. Not an easy skill but done brilliantly!

Posted 9 Years Ago


from the deepest depths comes the pain you write of and if you are lucky you are waiting in limbo for the day you can pick yourself up and live again.

Posted 9 Years Ago


hanir

9 Years Ago

I agree...and to the deepest depths of the earth Ive been searching for that luck! Whew!
Tha.. read more
terry smith

9 Years Ago

You will search in vain...until you stop looking, then there it will be.
hanir

9 Years Ago

Yes..hopefully soon..
yes, there are things we never get back, no matter how long we wait for them...love the image with the poem...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hanir

9 Years Ago

Yes..and it hurts like hell.
Thanks for reviewing. 😊
....................

9 Years Ago

it does..you are welcome :)
"...there are things that are really gone..."
Haaaaay. Hehe. -------- can't find the right word Ms. Hanir... I'm speechless..

Great poem as always :-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


hanir

9 Years Ago

Thanks! 😊
binibiningmaya

9 Years Ago

You're welcome Ms. Hanir :)
I love this! read most of your poems and you're a great writer!

Posted 9 Years Ago


hanir

9 Years Ago

Oh so nice of you to read my posts. Thanks a lot! 😊
This actually portrayed the ultimate truth of each man
's life, nd dat made it a truly gripping read
Enjoyd it!! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


hanir

9 Years Ago

Thanks for taking time to read. 😊
The words are true in your poetry.
"You've been missing something.
You wish to have it back. "
All of us hold regret. Life is finding and losing. Hard to hard tight to things we need. Very good of words leading the reader to strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


hanir

9 Years Ago

Thank you for such a wonderful review! 😊
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

My pleasure and you are welcome.
Oblivion - as in the final breath, or the big sleep? We all stuggle with voids at some point in our lives, and we all lose things. Some forever. Others only temporarily.
There is much sadness in your words, and a deep sense of loss...
You write beautifully :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


hanir

9 Years Ago

Thanks! You are a creative writer too! Love reading your poems.

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Added on August 11, 2015
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