Plea

Plea

A Poem by Hannah W

I say I want to kill myself
As a joke.
Hoping you will see the
Sadness in my eyes,
And realize it is anything but

© 2015 Hannah W


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The poem itself I think is quite hopeful, the fact it ends briefly suggests a certain eventuality of aid and that its not too late. good poem, strong message nice structure. only personal query is that I think some powerful words could help but at the same time the lack of said words leaves a hopeless, lifeless tone to the poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


See: it depends, some people may care and tell you not to, and some might care less. In the end, it is up to you to be strong, and know for sure that it's not worth it; you'll simply lose this life and the after. No one wants to end up that way. Trust me. Thank you for sharing your emotions, and reaching out for support through your writing. God bless.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on February 1, 2015
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