Interest and passed glory

stageplay

Dear me,

You come to me with interest, everybody comes to me with interest. But when they've reach me, I scare them off. 

So yes, go away again, everyone goes away. They come near me and go away immediately, with fear in their eyes.
Gosh, I repeat myself a lot.

When I have stopped writing to you, when my pencil is too little and the ink is empty, then…well then you’re gone too because I’m not interesting by then anymore.

Yes when my ink is empty the story is done, my story will be finished, dusty and moldy in the closet. Then there will be nobody here, then you won’t be there.
                            I won’t be there.

But it’s okay, because I’m happy... really… and you will make friends, have fun, meet someone nice, you will marry, have children and life happily ever after.

I will stay here and let you shine.

I am passed glory.

Sincerely,

Yourself.

Author's Note

This one is based on last review of Coyote. I hope he'll appreciate it.
I hope you all will 'enjoy' it.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe life will fall into place. All of us feel alone sometime in a life. I desire loneliness for 5 years. To gather and re-gain my mind and some logic. I like the ending to this chapter. A excellent chapter. I like the format and the way you are writing this tale.
Coyote

[TheCreativityItself]

Thank you, I really appreciate it.
After reading this chapter, I realized it looked like your review of last chapter (short letter). So my new version of this chapter is especially rewritten for you. Thank you for all the reviews because you really help me think about what I want to say and how I want the next chapter to be.
It is very important have everything clear and logic for yourself, I hope you are doing fine by now!

[TheCreativityItself]

it is very important having* everything

[Renay]

"I will stay here and let you shine." This sentence really speaks volumes to me. As a reader I can relate to my past self and the pain it has felt.

Good job.

[TheCreativityItself]

I hope it doesn't sound too awful, I don't want people to feel all the pain they've suffered in their life. It is good that I let the writing really speak to you but if it goes to far, please let me know and I will change it.

[SilentVerses]

A melancholy tune of a lonely self inside an encapsulating body that is no longer recognizable, leaving the parts of you that you feel are dragging, and yet those parts depict a voice you are sorrowful to part with. On a grammar point 'I scare them of'-"I scare them off'.
But very emotive and powerful the want for isolation and parting of self sings a bitter tune of dispassionate desolation. I like it.

[TheCreativityItself]

Thank you Silent Verses, as I said to Coyote, your review is really helping me! After writing something I always read it again before posting, but afterwards when I read the reviews I always get a new point of view of my writing. I am really glad you reviewed me.
I hope my grammar mistakes don't bother you, I'm dutch and after some years of bad English teachers at school, my English isn't that fine (?) as it supposed to be.

[~ Moonlight ~]

So very sad, I hope this doesn't happen in real life! Not like me... I had quite a rough childhood... Infact I'm still living the pain.

[TheElfPrincess]

It's sad...., but still very beautiful. Well done, I'm proud of you :)