Wish...

from the deepest corner of my heart..

wish death could solve all problems ..

wish everything finished in one  go ... 

life seems so tiring sometimes .. 

wonder how death would taste like .. 

they say it's just a touch and a go .. 

but would it hurt to leave the worries behind .. 

after all, we do love worries .. 

we cannot live without them ... 

a happy life is a myth ... 

a happy death .. unknown ...

Reviews

[Blue Ivory]

Death is considered beautiful by poets and artists. To us, the idea of mystery fuses itself with beauty. Often we have all wondered about death. Some of us fantasize about it. A few of those dare to write it down. But only very few have tried putting their words to actions, and the ones who have, have joined the world of the unknown. I have this theory, that true beauty was meant to be a secret. Only a chosen few can experience it. Once they do, they don't have words to express themselves-and in the case of death, there is no choice! So I really like your thoughts on this. I love this sort of poetry :)

[Hamza]

i feel death has been portrayed wrongly as the last salvation from the worries of our life, i thought putting it in a contrast ..
though i gave a lot of priorities to the pain and loss, death somehow turns out to be inevitably the last resort ... people just can't get over with it ..
thank you so much .. :)

[Blue Ivory]

That's actually a pretty interesting thought!

[WingsToFly]

Life and Death, two faces of a coin. Good write, good theme.

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

Hmm.. Very very curious.

This kind of presents things we all think about, in a sense. Whether or not it would be good to die, what it'd be like..
Its thought provoking, to say the least. Me gusta.

[KarinaT]

Exactly.It's unknown. But it adds a welcome value and beauty to life that perhaps would be missing without the questions and knowledge of finite quality.

[dunnia]

This is amazing...i love your work

[Becca Bishop]

This is so great. I think your absolutely right about death. It's so interesting to everyone, but especially the creative people (hey, that's us! :D) I don't think there's a single person in this whole wide world who hasn't fantaciszed or wondered what death would be like. "A happy life is a myth..." not sure if I agree completely with that line, but it oftentimes feels that way, doesn't it? All in all, great poem :D :D :D :D :D

[Abdur Raqeeb]

Very often curiosity gets the better of us. And people who want to taste death before it arrives are foolish indeed. Nice write.

[Muhammad Qasim]

Death is a mystery and it is because of the idea that we will die someday that we live to our fullest!!

[Castonovia]

Hmmm, thought provoking... death. Death, considered oblivion, a release from this world, but it is often wondered what lies beyond the veil of dreary dark or sweet unknown. Life seems a neverending cycle of bitter woes or shreds of beauty, but overall tiring keeping up with it all. What lies beyond death??? Nothingness or maybe something more? Still unknown... intrigueing concept especially the last piece. Dazzling indeed ;)

[hogan]

Yes I like this, I have written something similar on here, it's named Death and Life or Like and Death, not too sure myself, Was inspired by thoughts of my wife going to visit her sister who has a brain tumour. Enough of this too depressing.