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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Thoughts without Conclusions...

Thoughts without Conclusions...

A Story by Hamza
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Tried to ponder about the differences in the words desire and destiny .. And all i found was deep, endless and cruel conclusions .. Wonder what God was thinking before writing everyone's destiny ...

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this world stands on some pillars.. pillars that define everything ..
there's not a bit that is not defined, not an inch that has not been
predetermined..
and there's everything that is fixed to some rules ..
rules we can never ever dare to break or append..
life is just so bound in these rules that we find no way out for the
salvation of our souls and our desires..
this is what we call .. worldliness ... a human guideline ...
sometimes we wish to attain things out of these bounds...
a mistake ... a terrible mistake on our part ...
even when we know the answer to such things, we still desire for it ...
it is human nature to go against the rule of the land ..
did Adam not go against His will ..
did he not have what was restricted for him ...
the answer is in itself a question ..



"forbidden fruit is the sweetest.." ...
in this case ... an apple...
an apple on a table actually happens to be 
anyone's who gets it first ..
but no... when it is meant for someone else ... 
it can never be yours ..
but the desire for this forbidden apple 
becomes graver and graver as
the time arrives for it to go...
it is a terrible thing to believe that what could've been ours, had we strived to get it.. is no more in sight...
helpless as we see it go to someone else ...
life plays a game with everyone ... showing a thing and giving
something else ..
it's more like an online retail shop .. that says .. "Pictures shown
are models, actual model may vary from the one shown."
true ....
doesn't this define life ..
the more we try and understand it .. the more it becomes complex ..
this is life ... a picture within a picture within a picture ...
within a picture ...

© 2012 Hamza


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*a picture within a picture within a picture*
amazing !

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hamza

12 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Added on October 23, 2012
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Tags: thoughts, destiny, forbidden, desire, terrible, life, happiness, joy, sad, strive, conclusion.

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Hamza
Hamza

Jammu, Jammu & kashmir, India



About
Hamza .. that's me .. An Engineer by profession and a writer by Emotion ... I am 26... I am no different, I am not special .. I'm just a different face, and a few different fingerprints .. I am.. more..

Writing
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A Poem by Hamza