Sometimes, I Cry ..

And I wish i could be where you are ...

Someday you will be caught
Caught in your own thoughts..
Someday you will realize how I felt,
when you turned your back on me...

It isn't the moment that passed
It is about each day that I live ...
I have forgotten what sleep is
I know not what a smile means ...

I'm hurt, not because you left
For your leaving was inevitable
I'm hurt because I hurt them..
The ones who just never left...

For all I did, was to see you smile ..
You filled me up with pain..
and with a silence, that ripped my soul
You burnt me in my own tears... Alive ...

Author's Note

made it up... an utmost stupidity...

Reviews

[Eve]

I have been living this feeling for the last six months and you have expressed it so well here in this outpouring, if only there was a way to see how our actions will effect others before hand, all we can do is do what we think is best and keep trying to help what we hurt; and if not ourselves then others who feel this too; along the way. lovely write.

[Hamza]

if you're living in this situation then i have a remedy here from someone who left that scar .. "sometimes when people don't know what they're doing and when you confront them, they blame back at you.. so the best thing i to ignore ... "
you understood the sentiment quite well and thank you for the kind words ..
:)

[Mal]

The last line is very striking. I'm glad to find another Indian writer around here. Keep going.

[Hamza]

It was done in 2 minutes and was basically done for this last line only ...
And about being Indian .. I would say we inherit this from the poetic nation we live in...
Thank you :)

[Amanda J. S.]

Loving it!

[Hamza]

Thank you :)