Thoughts within those thoughts..

about the times you spent with the one who once was your love

Sometimes ... All we want is to sit all alone in a corner and think 
about whether the things that were important for us yesterday deserved 
so much importance or ... We just gave them too much thought 
unnecessarily... 

And the heart says ... "Yes, they were really the best things ... Had 
they not been there, you wouldn't have been what you are now..." 

Sometimes somebody's prayers become so special, that they put you to a 
course you could only dream about ... 

Rare.. Precious.. Pure.. Dreams.. Thoughts.. Prayers.. Blessings.. 
Love.. Life .. Us .. 

Fathoming Life...

Reviews

[Zammy]

the description pretty much fits with the write
but, the flow in the poem, generalizes the term.
so i would say it hovers over every aspect of life.
very thoughtful

[Hamza]

Well, I tried to converge the thoughts to a single aspect ... Anyway thank you :)

[hogan]

Not looked at your profile but these words remind me of my early teens. Some elements of the words still ring true

[Hamza]

:)
thanks ..

[hogan]

I did like your work by the way, forgot to mention that, just flicked out my thoughts first time

[Hamza]

:)
thank you again ...
God bless :)

[Michael G.]

Interesting thoughts. Keep writing.

[Hamza]

thank you
happy writing :)