Leaves

I thought this one up a long time ago...

The simple things come from high above.

The big bushes of pure symphony upon mountains of wood and bark.

The things that rain on you in the cold fall.

What it is, is a miracle of nature.

For the leaf is as peaceful as the pure human mind.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Xerclipse]

I like the idea but it could be expanded. it doesnt even rhyme.

[The Girl with the smile]

I love reading poems about nature! I love the last line of your poem, it gives the reader something to think about. Great write.

[Robert delfuego or Etha..]

Nathan I'm going to be blunt it's pretty but it dosen't rhyme that's just a personal thing and besides that though you have a generic topic if you pick an overused topic it needs to be kick a*s