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The blue waters of Hawaii glimmer off the rocky hills and cliffs,

As I stand there I take a deep breath and listen to it all hit.

The Hawaii'n waters are crystal clear blue with little critters swimming around playing,

Anyone can watch the critters swimming around, not everyone can see them swimming around from a cliff.

The crystal clear waters of Hawaii glimmer off the rocky hills and cliffs,

With puddles of water sitting in between rocks one can see many things at work.

The oceans in Hawaii glimmer with hope that you might see a whale,

What was seen the most were turtles who are rare and almost extinct.

The blue waters of Hawaii glimmer off the rocky hills and cliffs,

There are those jumping into the water into a hole straight off a cliff.

YIKES!

The blue water of Hawaii can get dangerous here,

The critters will skitter and scurry to show when danger is near.

Oh yes, the blue waters of Hawaii that glimmer off the rocky hills and cliffs,

how mighty magnificent the ocean looks from a tall steep mountain.

A volcano flowing not to far,

How the ocean and volcanic fire mix and crystalize.

The blue waters of Hawaii that glimmer off the rocky hills and cliffs,

oh how magnificent it can be.

Author's Note

Picture was taking in Hawaii.
Please let me know of any errors I make.

Reviews

[Kristen H]

Great poem! Loved the imagery. I'm just confused about the line "not everyone can see them swimming around from a cliff" with the word from being inserted there, but it could be just me. Other than that, it's awesome!