IT IS MORNING NOW (3:07 AM)

IT IS MORNING NOW (3:07 AM)

A Poem by HamonoAkira
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3.07AM. That person's going away on daybreak. And I'm left to fend for myself.

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 It is morning now

The dawn is fast nigh
The stars are still above
The day you'll say good-bye
How can I get over you?
When the day has just started
I wish you'd go away now
And never heard me faltered
Go now, just go
Go and leave me here
Even without a good-bye
I will not shed hope not to shed a tear
Go now, just leave
This day I'll try to forget your brow
Even without a fare-well
It is morning now

© 2009 HamonoAkira


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This is a good poem however I do feel you should elaborate more. Good write

Posted 15 Years Ago


Ah, the hope that comes with morning! Great!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I love this poem - just as I do all of the others of yours that I have read. Your writing always captivates me, wanting to read more. Even though it is short, it has a point that gets across.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Thanks. But I do think I need to work on poem length. My Muse only gives me short and quick visits. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


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You have connected the phases in morning with that of life ..quite Impressively
But on the other side it shows a pain of grief nd memories residing by :=)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on March 10, 2009

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HamonoAkira
HamonoAkira

Cagayan de Oro City, Philippines



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Ah, I'm a poet. By that I mean I love writing poems. A lot. But by "a poet" I also mean that I needed a lot of training, inspiration, and determination to become "A Poet". There's a lot of difference,.. more..

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