Skimming a Pond on a Hot Summer Day

Skimming a Pond on a Hot Summer Day

A Poem by HamonoAkira
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poem while in the university

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The hot sun flew over my curls and I
Took the dainty pink daffodil
Wind never played on my blonde curls as I
Picked the rose until
I quacked and Phoebus’ horse-drawn chariot
Is already above me
Little grasshoppers rested in their moat
And I swam in their sea. 
 
A hot summer day
Skimming on a pond
Discovering – what
My childhood just can’t 
 
A hot summer day
Skimming on a pond – 
And again, and again, and again before – 
This moment end.

© 2008 HamonoAkira


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A great write. Well done

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A very nice poem. Good imagery and just all together, a wonderful read. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest!! :)
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I am addicted to your poetry. There is just something about your writing that captivates me. Imagery is thing that you're best at... Never let go of the ability to captivate a reader with that.

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A great write. Well done

Author, Nancy Lee Shrader

IS IT NOW? The End of Days!
ISBN # 978-1413781441

IS HE MESSIAH? Messianic Prophecies Revealed!
ISBN # 978-1424164998

The Curse of Mayweather House
ISBN # 978-1894936880
Haiku Smiles
ISBN # 978-0982205655

Coming in 2009
The Haunting of Mayweather House
Celestial Invasion
www.freewebs.com/booksbynancyleeshrader/

Autographed books sold at
www.readmorebooks4less.com


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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HamonoAkira

Cagayan de Oro City, Philippines



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