Distance is but a moment away

Distance is but a moment away

A Poem by The Lady Anasteja
"

if we are going to believe - then leap we must

"
suppress this exigency
stratum's of panic and uncertainty
 
belief awaits within our hearts

for fear to release his grip

 

over mind

 

shed the shell of discomfort

integrate nexus

for the spark has detonated to flames unprecedented

 

worry not of what may not become

rejoice in what has -

a friendship, an allegiance, a beginning

 

a chance  

 

 

 

 

 

© 2009 The Lady Anasteja


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This made me think of some things that has happened to me lately

Nice

Posted 15 Years Ago


A chance to leap! Then go young spirit, fly! Hah! I Very insightful and giving away a few clues to exact meaning but enough words to pin itself worthingly (it's a new word I just made up) onto the board of hope!

Aah...and a metaphor ;)

Posted 15 Years Ago


Lovely!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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JRB
very nice write,
Jan/uisiom

Posted 16 Years Ago


thank you for this. i certainly hope that belief is in the wings of my heart.

a beautiful and sparkling poem that delivers a positive message.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Intresting piece, nice flow, great word usuage and description. I enjoyed this piece.

Posted 16 Years Ago


deep write and emotional

worry not of what may not become
rejoice in what has -
a friendship, an allegiance, a beginning
a chance

Love this stanza, this is well written.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Des
Very open for interpretation. I liked the way this one flowed. Agh, and it made me feel kind of dumb because I had to look up a couple of those words! But I love that about stuff I read. This is very articulate and I love it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This may be my favorite of your poems because of the message. Fear is a strong enemy of belief...that's for sure. I really like the way your mind processes things...it's an adventure.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed this piece very much. Stratums... exigency. Interesting. Love your vocab usage.

Perhaps this is the internal battle of overanalyzing a new partner so much that the present is not enjoyed? As usual, your work is open for interpretation. That's what I gathered.

Nice piece, Lady A.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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The Lady Anasteja
The Lady Anasteja

Stroudsburg, PA



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