Thou Shalt be a Fool

Rough draft

Preaching comes easily

 

Right - Wrong

Should - Should not

Move forward - Run from

 

Being part of the congregation proves difficult

 

Observe -

Enlightened -

Comprehend -

 

Ignore

 

such is my life -

 

do. do. do. do.

 

deaf, dumb, blind  fool.  

 

 

 

Reviews

[Leran Vakem]

A mind provoking piece this. It really made me think.

Keep them coming
Leran Vakem

[☮]

This reminds me of material I write when I'm high... you tap into some parts of your brain that are so analytical that it hurts.

I see this as being the hypocrisy of man. That perhaps everything we're taught actually makes us do the opposite? Reciprocity.

I'm sure I could be wrong, but the beauty of work such as this one is that many interpretations can be gathered.

Nice write!

[jaime]

Hmmm....wow. Very, very interesting...one that gets the mind going. Preaching ISthe easy part...I agree...

[Lestat's daughter]

It's ok, I can't really judge this poem since I'm athiest.

[StrangeVoices]

I like it, I think it will form into a nice poem.