Enigmatically

A poem by Anasteja Carew

downcast eyes awakened on this culminating day

marveled anticipation on to tomorrow

 

moderate development signals - stroll with vivid skies

 

the root of perseverance is the principal to clarity   

within the eye of the mind the heart dances 

 

untamed and liberated 

 

once unredeemed now only to be ignited?

Reviews

[Chaos]

I love this piece because I have been there many times. That moment when you realize that the fight you have been raging for years is now showing the success that was guided by the motivation that you dragged through your broken heart, disappointments, shattered life and old scars. The unredeemed is who I was when I was chained by my fear and by the intimidation of others and by my unknown reality. My former self is the liberation because those chains were were cut free from ankles by the saw of perserverance and determination. I refused to give up! "I wont' give up!" I am a survivor of many things. Thank you for sharing this piece with me. It's now one of my favorites.

[Leran Vakem]

What a nice short, to the point poem
Me like very much
Leran Vakem

[The Spaniard]

"once unredeemed now only to be ignited?" What a great line, your work always amazes me. i will read more later. now im too tired.