Breathe

with feet up -

scratching from within

 

foraging for an exit -

glued to the seam

 

immutable anguish

retains the lease

 

luminosity vacated -

cells sorely deteriorate

 

each salty extraction

binds tribulation

Reviews

[Leran Vakem]

Short, sweet and very powerful

Leran Vakem

[dilettante1890]

Short & beautiful.

[jaime]

reminds me of drowning....yikes. I absolutely love your way with words. I don't always understand them all...but they always leave FEELING...which stays with us longer than understanding ...doesn't it? kudos!

[Panda]

Wow..This is an intresting poem. It is full of pain and releasing it in cries. I enjoyed reading this piece, it is well written. I love how it is somewhat vague, it makes it intresting. Great job! :D