Tomorrow

Eyes open

apprehension dwells ceasing promise

   

familiar concept -

likely recurrence 

   

bonded chains of constriction - absent remedy 

   

arm in arm with chance

emancipate trepidation

 

gardens bloom despite the drought 

 

welcome

Reviews

[Panda]

So little words, but so many at the same time. This is a lovely piece of writing, you wrote it very well. It is short, sweet, but not simple. Very good!

[☮]

This reminds me of the adventure we take every day. We're still here in the midst of battle. Trepidation surrounds us, but we must still notice that life continues... I liked this. Nice write, A!

[Lestat's daughter]

It's pretty.

[jaime]

"gardens bloom despite the drought "
I love that...and it's so true. We don't always have a remedy do we? Yet sometimes it is out of our control...and things happen anyway.
I have no idea...if that is close to what you meant with this piece...but what I love about your writing is it (as I've said before) ...really leaves me with a feeling.

[The Spaniard]

I've been thinking a lot about this piece and working out certain segments in my head and my conclusions reached are to much to express in comments nor could I really transcribe my thought proccess to words regardless. You're writting really makes one think. well done.

[closed]

I agree with Nomad person guy...>_> lol...You do say a lot with very little words. I love it

[INSURGENT*76]

you say alot with very little ... i like