Habitual Cycle

Another day

As I sit here, I wonder

once, twice,

will the third be just as foregoing

or will it be unprecedented

 

yet,

aren't they all equal

 

six years gone, another two have followed

 

fooled with the promise of contingency

 

we can't relive what's already been 

but isn't that how we live generally?

walking in the shoes of old habits

 

one forward step is only the continuous of time on repeat

 

ahh.. history..

 

is the present

Reviews

[The Spaniard]

we all make the same mistakes, how oddly relevent to my present situation. I do love your words so carefully pieced together.

[Leran Vakem]

The past mold the present as it shapes the future. I really like this one.
A favorite of mine for sure this
Keep up to awestruck me
Leran Vakem

[jaime]

you continue to amaze me. I loved it all but this is my favorite line: "we can't relive what's already been
but isn't that how we live generally? walking in the shoes of old habits" brilliant.

[Forist.johnston]

This is my favorite out of all your poems. I really loved the feel, and the first line captured my attention. Kudos to you.