Farmer Giles

A small poem I wrote.

Sitting on the train

Looking in pain

Shifting side to side

Irritable hide

Haemorrhoids

Haemorrhoids

Reviews

[Gandré]

That gave you the tendency to be annoyed, a great fragment. The things - one doesn't speak about. You did and it was not unpleasant. Also the red color was hilarious. makes it complete. We won't now start a conversation, if we experienced such a pain ha ha ha but ! this was a something, this was really readable. creativeness is everything ! I liked it !

P.S. May I say, you have a typo there irritable - add one r
ciao
l.g.

[Jee]

HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!! Absolutely hilarious....sorry...i probably shouldn't find it so funny.