One touch

This is the first poem I've written in a few years. I want opinions on how to make it better.

His gentle touch;
His soft slow kisses;
The way he says my name.
I could go on forever about things I love.
But, for some reason I'm at a lost for words.
Maybe it's because of the way he takes my breath away;
Or the way he stole my my heart.

Just one little touch.
That's all it took to fall for the one guy I will be with forever.
Just one touch.
That's all it took for me to realize;
I messed up in the past.
I let all these guys walk all over me.
Just one touch.
It taught me that there is somebody that loves me.
I can be free to express myself.
Just one touch.
And I will fall for him over and over again.

Reviews

[Devesh]

A nice and enjoyable read. For me, the first stanza was a bit too cliched, I thought the second was much much better. Also, the fifth line of the first stanza should read "But, for some reason I'm at a loss for words". Thanks for sharing! :)

[haleyy(:]

Thanks. It's my first poem in a few years. D: my boyfriend asked for one so I got this... Thanks for the advice too :)

[Devesh]

Understandable, that's pretty good for the first one! You're welcome! :)