Float

Float

A Poem by nikolaia
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Form poem. It's a tanka

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Scattered ash drifting

Soft rivers accepting it

eyes now averted

Wishes float off with remains

Prayers, too, are carried away

© 2011 nikolaia


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the imagery is mercurial beautiful~ carried along on the wave of imagery~

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very good...

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Added on January 30, 2011
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