haiku

Beside and Without You

I am without you

Left in the wonder of time

doubt is a constant

 

I am beside you

The world dissolves around us

We know what we have

Author's Note

I like haikus. They're fun.

Reviews

[nikolaia]

lonely leaf falling
it has no rush to arrive
cradles the breeze for now

There's your nature!

[Mikey S.]

Good right indeed but aren't haiku's suppose to mainly be about nature?

They do flow nicely though.

[JenLyn]

They flow well together, good write. :)