Moonlit Serenade

Written one night during a quiet full moon evening.

the skies are black with clouds thick and white

twinkling white dots scatter the top

upon the earth the Beams shine so bright

a Moonlit Serenade plays tonight

sounds of sirens echo through the air

caused by the large full Orb in the sky

there is a Cleanliness with each breath

the Music that the city conducts

is heard by Luna in her white tux

the Dreamland some begin to spectate

it lasts only a moment in time

this Moonlit Serenade in the sky

but Luna will always remember

when she went for a dance in the night

Author's Note

Capitalization is on purpose!

Reviews

[D. Pesek]

This is a good poem. The capitalziation is on a purpose, but why? I like the part about cleanliness with each breath...that added alot to the imagery. "her white tux" I like that. since you referred to the moon as a female, I am assuming the tuxedo would be the clouds in the sky? great job, I enjoyed reading this.

[Jacqueline Lopez]

Wow! This amazing and you have many beautiful lines in this poem. I love how Luna will always remember when she went for a dance in the night. It touched a string in my heart. Love it!

[Luna]

That is very enchanting and very pretty. I do understand the capitalization too. Thank you for posting!

[WriterMe]

The title makes me want to sigh =] Great work. I loved the entire picture you painted with your words. The poem does have its continuity issues but I suppose thats how it is suppose to be.