Hungry

Hungry

A Poem by Diego
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Simply a metaphor for loneliness.

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i get very Hungry
i go to the Store
i try to Meet Vegetables
but they go to sleep and snore
i sit in the Dairy Aisle
listening to the words of the Eggs
i rendezvous with the Cereal
they have so many jokes to say
the Meat Section was interesting
the Beef are in rare form today
i search for so many Groceries
but none want to go home with me anymore
i get so very Hungry
so Hungry i can’t Eat anymore

© 2009 Diego


Author's Note

Diego
Capitalization is on purpose!

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i LOVE this, it's so unique and made me smile

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a very different, and interesting, poem. I like the extended metaphor. Nice work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very creative metaphor indeed, and the last line really ties everything in nicely. Sometimes we purposely lead a reclusive lifestyle to avoid rejection and hurt. I guess the past has a way of making her scar, yes? Yet the hunger remains...

This was very different, my friend. I enjoyed it.



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 31, 2009

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Diego
Diego

Tucson, AZ



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