Annoyance

discordant resonance

channeled through the air bladder

released via chanter reed

manipulated by the tenor drone

 

air vibrates

shivers go down my spine

my ears ache, stomach churns

 

   damn bagpipes       

Author's Note

written for prompt: harsh sounds/ 30 words

Reviews

[Emerald Seas]

I like the structure and your descriptive tone before you allow your reader to know the feeling the sound receives from the listener. Great write!