Usefulness

Usefulness

A Poem by Dennis White
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Reflective poem on the titled subject

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The can I kick has a hollow sound
Its silver flesh reflects the boot dents

The sliced cling peaches 
Which once populated its interior
Are but a fading memory

This can's usefulness has been exhausted
Other than its new current use
A kick toy for a restless boot

Don't outlive your usefulness

© 2014 Dennis White


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Dennis White
I am open to constructive criticism.

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I don't have any criticism. Obviously you are a good writer, and your work is polished.

The message is very clear. Outlive your usefulness, and you become just something to kick around...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dennis White

10 Years Ago

A reflection on our throw away society which includes people too. Thanks for reading and commenting.. read more

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Added on June 16, 2014
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Dennis White
Dennis White

Carleton, MI



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