How  can there be

How can there be

A Poem by sri

 

 

One night blurring into
Many pieces of me

 

Could there be more to see
To naked eyes emotion

 

Filling every pore
Drowning purging sore

 

How can there be...

© 2012 sri


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You wrote with an elegant hand, yet wield aggressive emotions that restrain us and force us to feel emotions that could only be channeled through disturbing imagery. This is true talent. It is brilliant how you have given us a story in itself, but use our own imaginations against us.....as you only gave us enough to allow our own pasts to create our own unique perspective.


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Wow this does have a cutting elegance, poignant Sri, I don't know how it can be...

Maybe inside, you were always a writer but never knew it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Thank you for reading and the words of encouragement. It was my first ever poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i can feel some raw enegry in this write, which is very good.
I totally loved this piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You wrote with an elegant hand, yet wield aggressive emotions that restrain us and force us to feel emotions that could only be channeled through disturbing imagery. This is true talent. It is brilliant how you have given us a story in itself, but use our own imaginations against us.....as you only gave us enough to allow our own pasts to create our own unique perspective.


This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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sri

Montreal, Quebec, Canada



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