Rising Soul

When her body hit the bottom

When her soul lost the blossom

When she surrendered to the lord

Of the darkness and gloominess

The sky opened wide ,

With a brightening light

A glowing angel  arose and said

Hold yourself together

And give me your hand , I will raise your soul

To a holy land , Where There is no pain or suffering

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

When her body hit the bottom

When her soul lost the blossom

When she surrendered to the lord

Of the darkness and gloominess

The sky opened wide ,

With a brightening light

A glowing angel arose and said

Hold yourself together

And give me your hand , I will raise your soul

To a holy land , Where there is no pain or suffering

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you ^_^ So so much , i appreciate it :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

my pleasure Hadeel.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

:)

[Deron Alexis]

when someone reaches their lowest their really isn't much they can do but wait until the heavens answers prayers and lifts them out probably that's where heavens help us came from this was great soul touching thanks for sharing

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Welcome :)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

Quite nice and lovely

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thanks Adam :)

[Crissie Luce]

Wow, this is sweet, love it Hadeel!;-)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

I am so glad you loved it , it is sweet as you are :)

[Crissie Luce]

Awwww U made my day!! Ur 2 sweet!!;-);-);-) Enjoy ur Sunday:-)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you , I already did , now its the night of Monday :)

[Crissie Luce]

;-);-);-)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

XOXO

[Annabelle Lee]

I loved it.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Really??

[Annabelle Lee]

yes

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

great :) thank you

[Dalia]

Very nice
it turns from the bottom to far above the sky
Loved it , hope your soul will feel always as high as an angel :)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

^_^ Thanks :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

An ethereal piece with an eclesiatical temerament. Some translation errors but a nice little piece.