Rising Soul

When her body hit the bottom

When her soul lost the blossom

When she surrendered to the lord

Of the darkness and gloominess

The sky opened wide ,

With a brightening light

A glowing angel  arose and said

Hold yourself together

And give me your hand , I will raise your soul

To a holy land , Where There is no pain or suffering

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

When her body hit the bottom

When her soul lost the blossom

When she surrendered to the lord

Of the darkness and gloominess

The sky opened wide ,

With a brightening light

A glowing angel arose and said

Hold yourself together

And give me your hand , I will raise your soul

To a holy land , Where there is no pain or suffering

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you ^_^ So so much , i appreciate it :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

my pleasure Hadeel.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

:)

[Rosa Lee]

Beautiful!

[rnuff]

oh wow this is so wonderful, I really enjoyed this one.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Great , thank you i am glad that you enjoyed it ^_^

[Lewis Davis-Norman]

Sounds very religious but not in a bad way. The religious language is refreshing and powerful. Nicely written, I really enjoyed it.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thanks lewis i appreciate it :)

[Frieda P]

Lovely sentiment, beatific write. Nice one Hadeel.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you dear ^_^

[scripted]

great write... we all at one point in life hit rock bottom, but i believe that keeping our heads held high and keeping our spirits up will allow us to maintain hope... love the piece and thank you for sharing

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Welcome , I'm so glad that you loved it :)

[Whiskurz]

I really liked this piece my friend.....Whisk

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Glad you did ^_^

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Hope lands strong in the hands of all, very well written, good read.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you , I appreciate your lovely visit :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

your welcome.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

:)

[khalid]

i think the angel here is hope. when we feel so down, only hope can help us to struggle again. i really like how you have expressed that in a very nice way.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

I 'm glad that you liked it :)

[s y e]

This is beautifully written. Sweet

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you sweetie ^_^

[s y e]

Anytime darling! ;-)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

;)

[s y e]

^^

[Yasmin]

Short strong and lovely
good job

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you yaz ;)