Stolen Moments

When we lose those precious moments

He sat there on his dark thrown

Laughing and thinking of every

Single moment he stole...

staring at his crystal ball

enjoying disappointments of them all

When someone wanted to say I love you

But he couldn't do…

When someone was busy to say to his parents

I miss you …

And now he is crying over their grave

Hugging the sand covering their bodies, and their souls

When someone lost his friends because he was

So proud to say I need you by my side

And now he is a lone immersed in regret and sore

When someone wanted to catch the train to say

Please don't go away but he missed it, it was too late...

When someone wanted to apologize for hurting a close person to his heart, but he couldn't say...

When he stole a smile, a love, a tear

He is too cold to feel or hear

The wounded song of their sobs

He is there laughing and stare

While he makes us drowning in our sins and tears

He is the dark side of you and me

The side which makes us cruel and mean…

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

this is a very eloquently poignant poem depicting when one misses a loved one due to them physically no longer being with them, i.e.: moving, or passed on...or when one takes another's love/friendship for granted. very relateable and beautifully penned. thanks for sharing :)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Welcome I am very glad that you liked it and felt that way , while reading it :)

[ms. barrie]

:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I like this a lot and espeically the twist at the end that challenges us all to think.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Yes :) Thank you , i am glad you liked it :)

[s y e]

Beautiful. I loved he meaning and it flows really well. Excellent poetry with beautiful words. So touching!

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you ^_^ i am glad you liked it

[s y e]

Welcome. I did. It was great

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

^_^

[Ahmad Cox]

Oh wow. I love the twist of meaning and purpose at the end. Very deep and beautiful

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thanks Ahmad :)

[Sami Khalil]

There is nothing like losing love moments or family moments for we feel the overwhelming regret and the fleeting of time that passes us by so fast . Every moments is precious and worth a lot . You have captured it in a good write...:)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you for your sweet visit ^_^ & review

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...^^~^^ :)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

:)

[Frieda P]

Apathy, indifference and regrets, those things that take away from life's treasures. This is like a wake up call sealed in poetry. Very nice.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you :) i am glad you liked it

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

nice one, hadeel!
your language and sense grows ever time
good! keep it up

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you my motive ^_^