Whispering memories

Some times when we are sitting alone with no where to go the memories just come suddenly , without a permission and start messing with our feelings..

The late  memories came from no where  

 And  whispered in my heart

 told me a few words

That tinkles in my ears

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Don't let the past hunt you

Don't let the grief hug you

With his strong arms… with his dark feel

Look at the mirror, and tell me what do you see?

Is that you're reflection ? or the ghost behind me?

Spread your wings among sunlight

Let the soreness evaporates through your heart

Come on ! hold my hand and fly with me

Light your soul with a flaming hope

Vanquish the dark of despair and sore

Open an new chapter in your life

Full of hope and candles light

Reviews

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Great..one..... "full of hope + candle;s light."........i really liked + loved your this poem...in your poem there's a bit of rhyming touch...as i saw.......i liked this one too...i love your tittle "whispering-memories".......here your word's are so nice ........so smooth.........i'd enjoyed it...
"light you're soul with the flaming hope,
your whispering tittle is so tip-top,
is your poem damn..damn....bad.....then i'd say...nope...nope.........nope.....
i liked+loved your beautiful thought's,
i wish that i'll further see such sort of poetry...as i hope...hope....hope............"
very nice poem.........92.7/100...........
have a nice day........!!

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you ^_^ for your sweet words

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Very good and uplifting piece Hadeel.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thanks I appreciate it :)

[Biju Viswanath]

very evocative. well done

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you :)

[Crissie Luce]

:-)Very Nice Hadeel! The words give hope.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you ^_^ , The man worth nothing without hope ...

[Crissie Luce]

:-)

[ms. barrie]

the imagery of your words are full of such profound enlightenment, encouragement, amazing poem, this is simply breath-taking! thank you for sharing :)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Welcome , and i am really glad that you liked it ^_^

[ms. barrie]

that i did, this was/is a pleasure to read :)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

:)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Asalaam Walekum Habibi!
Your words ring fresh air!

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Wa alaikom Al salam
Thank you for your sweet review :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I been to the gulf your country is a heaven of sand

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Well, but i'm not from gulf countries
i am from Jordan and its green :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I am glad it is....my ma walked thru jordan on foot to escape the Iraq invasion of kuwait years ago....well she reacged home..

[Ahmad Cox]

A beautiful light and energy and lifts you as you read it,

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you ^_^ I'm glad that you felt that way :)

[Frieda P]

Oh, I love this so much...hits a chord with me. Nice, really thought provoking and concise.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you i am glad you loved it ^_^