The white visitor

It is here…can't you hear

The children are singing

For the heaven's tear

Welcome , welcome

White visitor , we are here

Embrace the roofs , and the trees

Spread your peace all over the breeze

Let the purity of your heart

Invade ours …

Then  everyone might live

 In calm and peace

 

 

 

Reviews

[Jack...]

I like this and I really like you calling the snow, "The White Visitor". That is a very cool way to look at it. Very nice poem, it was bright and happy and a bit chilly. :)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

It is .This is how i felt about the snow , when it came to please this winter :)

[Chris]

I'm smiling... you've touched the magic inside.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Yayyyyy ^_^ I 'm so glad that my humble words could drew a smile on your face ;)

[Chris]

Our words aren't humble miss... just our selves. People that have survived (or ARE surviving) in dangerous places and troubling times are the ones that speak of calm and peace with wish-full voices.

[Chris]

We understand being "hungry" isn't always just having to make a choice between food items that we HAVE in a kitchen... when we even HAVE a kitchen.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Aha OK , then my simple words is that ok?

[Chris]

Using long words that even university students have to look up their definitions sort of defeats our purpose of writing what we feel - doesn't it?

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Yeah , it does :) Thank you so much Christopher , can i ask you something??

[Chris]

anytime - I always answer questions, tis the polite thing to do. And Chris is shortened from Christian - just so ya know

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

AW!! i thought it was for Christopher oops ! but Christian cool too , nice name , i just wanted to ask how old are you??

[Chris]

The Avatar is a real pic of me... that should say enough... chuckling here.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

^_^ Nice then :) I feel that you are a wise man
I am 25 years old :P maybe my avatar say so too :)

[Southern Cross]

Nothing like the purity of the first snowfall. This poem is dusted with flakes of love hope and peace. A delightful write

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you ^_^

[Phillitup]

this
is
so
beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you so much ^_^

[khalid]

snow cleans hearts and minds. i love it..

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Glad you loved it :)

[Lewis Davis-Norman]

Lovely message, really enjoyed it.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

^_^ Thanks ..

[Frieda P]

Who doesn't love snow? Except when it's black. Nice one!

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you Freida , sure white one hhh :)

[Frieda P]

:-)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

^_^

[Jasmin]

I really like it ... go ahead sweety

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thanks Jasmin ^_^

[Ahmad Cox]

Very peaceful and serene feeling when I read this poem.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you Ahmad :)

[Deron Alexis]

its good to welcome people shows you have nothing to hide but we all have those so heart felt invites like this are hard to come by these days

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Yes Deron , but in my poem i was welcoming the snow :)

[Deron Alexis]

:) lol most embarrassing misinterpretation ever XD

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

hhhhhhhhhh no its not never mind about it :)