One Heart Severed Another Is Broken

Collaboration between Deron Alexis and I

Deron

if a heart bares scars

Can it really belong

I belong to you

Oh…one who owns me

My heart sobs from when I cut it

Might it be safer with you?

Please take it somewhere nice

Hadeel

Oh… darling I wish I could

But I have to go …

You don't know how hard is it

but I got to  leave…

I'll take our sweet moments

and keep it between,

 dried petals of a red rose

You once gave it to me …

In a book of poems

 you wrote  it for me…

 

Deron

wrote it from my heart I did

and now to make you stay

my heart Itself I'll give

just put it next to yours

and all will be well

oh love of loves and grace of graces

let my heart see paradise "

 

Hadeel

Oh god … it hurts so bad

Its invading my body

like a poisoned sword

Its cutting my heart into small

Pieces of a broken memory

Lying on a wet floor of tears

 

Deron

then throw it away

let your departure leave

give me the sword

to cut my heart out

and you can heal

next to me dear beauty

next to my heart that longs to be

embraced by you once again"

 

Hadeel

Please my first and only love

Forgive me … I'll leave

With a broken heart …

 

Deron

A heart that I know

Would want what mine wants

For us to be one again

Is there anyone else?

Who like you,

Like your death dealing beauty

That can cut, scar and woo me at once?

Hurt and yet remedy?

Cure and so kill?

 

Hadeel

I hope… no.. no.. I believe

That someday soon

You will find a caring heart

Better than me …

And your new love will heal

Every wound I drew

On your precious heart

Please forgive me …

But I have to leave ….

Author's Note

This poem is inspired by amazing Deron , review please :)

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

This is so tender and loving....

effortless mastery from both....awesome :)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you :)

[Ahmad Cox]

Oh wow its so amazing how you go back and forth so effortlessly.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you :)

[Lexi]

wow, I really liked what you wrote, LOVED IT!

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you ^_^

[Chris]

Colabs are hard - even for native speakers. Matching the emotive flows, finding the rhythm... keeping theme. You did well.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you , i appreciate it so much :)

[Crissie Luce]

This is Beautiful!

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

thank you :)

[Southern Cross]

Very Shakespearean in content and flow..can see this as the beginning of a play.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Wow , really ! thank you , i am glad you liked it :)

[Deron Alexis]

lol play writing now there's a plan

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

hhhhhhhh yeah :P

[khalid]

very nicely penned. i like the flow, the similarity in feelings that helped in that flow and the similarity in vocabulary used that made it sound like if it was penned by one poet. nice collaboration between two talented poets..

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you :)

[Deron Alexis]

thanx XD

[Jordan's Back]

OMG This is Epic!!!!!!!!

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

hhhhhhhh do you think ?? its just imagination , and you know that imagination could run wild !

[Jordan's Back]

indeed Sometimes those make the best writings

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

yeah absolutely :)

[Anna]

Aw this is so sweet, I love it :) Who is Deron?

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

He is a 16 years old member in this cafe , and he helped me to write something new when i was ran out of inspiration , he is talented kid :)

[Frieda P]

What a great collaboration. It almost has a Shakesperian feel to it. Great flow, I enjoyed it.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Wow , thank you :) i am glad you felt that way :)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure :-)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

:)

[Deron Alexis]

lol a commendation from Frieda p is so awesome to get

[Frieda P]

hahaha you're a cutie patootie, that was sweet to say...i really loved it! :-)

[Deron Alexis]

nah really I'm a fan XD