well, we are so close to say good bye to " 2012"
its a year , that wasn't my favorite at all
yes I am grateful for the good times , and
the wonderful things that happened ..
but unfortunately most of it was dark and painful ...
it smelt death and grieve
tears and pains
sorrow and disappointments
we realized that life is too short to waste ....
and we have to hold tight our faith
we have to believe in peace and dignity more and more
its a values that should be passed from generation to generation
in this year there was so much blood and bodies ..
it was awful , worst than nightmares !
my wish from the bottom of my heart ,that the next year
would be way better
full of love and peace and faith...
Nice. I felt same this year. 2012 is gone now and there is little time left to cry over what you call as
"death and grieve
tears and pains
sorrow and disappointment"
I do not make new year wishes for I like to welcome the uncertain change rather that planning out or hoping for betterment.
I wish you peace as you hope for. :)
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11 Years Ago
yes this is what i am planing for the next year Neha , and i wrote it in my poem "in this year 2013".. read moreyes this is what i am planing for the next year Neha , and i wrote it in my poem "in this year 2013" check it out
You didn't capitalize "I's" ... still caught up on that sorry. I think any one who wants to write should play close attention to grammatical and spelling errors.
yes you are right, I'll fix it , but pardon me my English not perfect :)
and thank you again .. read moreyes you are right, I'll fix it , but pardon me my English not perfect :)
and thank you again ^_^
I love the hope in this poem amidst a volley of pain. Personally I think 2012 wasn't that great, so lets look forward to the new year! Hope the world is a better place:)
first, this is really well penned. second, for me, i dont think the same way, i cant say this year was good or bad simply because i can understand that calenders are man-made so for me, life is a series of events which we face due to our fate..
what you think was painful, may have the good for you. if a relation was broken, you would feel the pain but if you know that this partner was cheating or dishonest, you would feel happy it was broken...
thanks for your comment , its not about certain person , its about a whole nation Khalid , i am so d.. read morethanks for your comment , its not about certain person , its about a whole nation Khalid , i am so disappointed but what is going on in our Arabic countries , that's all , i hope that every thing would change for the better so soon inshallah , ameen
Nice. I felt same this year. 2012 is gone now and there is little time left to cry over what you call as
"death and grieve
tears and pains
sorrow and disappointment"
I do not make new year wishes for I like to welcome the uncertain change rather that planning out or hoping for betterment.
I wish you peace as you hope for. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
yes this is what i am planing for the next year Neha , and i wrote it in my poem "in this year 2013".. read moreyes this is what i am planing for the next year Neha , and i wrote it in my poem "in this year 2013" check it out
very well done i hope for next year that I be a better person be the change i want to see in the world the worst part is that i think humans as the whole are going to get worse before they get better
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11 Years Ago
this is what i am afraid of , i hope every thing would turn good at the end , and i wish that your w.. read morethis is what i am afraid of , i hope every thing would turn good at the end , and i wish that your wishes will be true :)
11 Years Ago
thanx yours too whatever good that you wish may you see it
I am a girl with a huge ambition, I know how to express my feelings very well , And i can do it either by writing or drawing. but recently i am heading to write more and more , and i hope that i could.. more..