the play

curtain falls
masks covering the stage
every body cheering , clapping
roses flying here and there

but now i can see your true face
behind that mask , a false feelings
a false smile
a false words

i was the only one
who thought that you were different
the only one who thought
that those smiles and words
are real , are mine

but i realized while watching the crowed
that i was the victim in that play
i saw myself on that stage
and the wolves around me
the audience laughing , clapping, cheering
curtain falls, and i am the victim

he was a false champion
behind the scenes there is reflection
of another life , another me
and in that play i was the victim ....

 

Reviews

[khalid]

so much depression and disappointment feelings expressed in this nice poem. it really expresses the real life with all the people around us putting on masks. we have to be always careful or we will be victims to such people. i liked how you picked the words and the images. as yosof wahbi said, ma idonia illa masra7on kabir( life is a large theatre..

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

yes it is a big theater :) thank you so much Khalid
and i like the fact that you also involved in Arabic literature ...

[khalid]

my pleasure..sure im involved in arabic literature and i have alot of writings in arabic as well but i dont post them here..

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

yes , sure you don't :) well, me too i write more in Arabic , and i think i am a way better in Arabic, i can express more , and honestly i am trying to publish a book inshallah :)

[khalid]

inshallah. i hope you get the best..

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

thank you :) if you may would you send one of your Arabic writings in msg to me ??

[khalid]

what type do you like?

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

poetry , khwater :)

[twitter]

I think this is a strong one i felt something while i was reading

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

yeah , i think its one of my best writing till now
i am trying ;), glad u liked it :*

[Deron Alexis]

way really well done with this one the metaphor of the play and the masks everything this was well done

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

really? i just wrote it , i feel that way by some people in this life :(

[Deron Alexis]

many people wear masks wrote a few on that as well

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

like who? like you?!

[Deron Alexis]

na i removed my mask
do you wear one?

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

hhhhhh no i don't :)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

are you a biologist or something ??

[Deron Alexis]

ima bio student high school

[Deron Alexis]

why do you ask

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

because of the photo of yours, i am a biotechnologist , we are related :P

[Deron Alexis]

lol cool XD

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

yeah it is ^_*