the play

curtain falls
masks covering the stage
every body cheering , clapping
roses flying here and there

but now i can see your true face
behind that mask , a false feelings
a false smile
a false words

i was the only one
who thought that you were different
the only one who thought
that those smiles and words
are real , are mine

but i realized while watching the crowed
that i was the victim in that play
i saw myself on that stage
and the wolves around me
the audience laughing , clapping, cheering
curtain falls, and i am the victim

he was a false champion
behind the scenes there is reflection
of another life , another me
and in that play i was the victim ....

 

Reviews

[khalid]

so much depression and disappointment feelings expressed in this nice poem. it really expresses the real life with all the people around us putting on masks. we have to be always careful or we will be victims to such people. i liked how you picked the words and the images. as yosof wahbi said, ma idonia illa masra7on kabir( life is a large theatre..

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

yes it is a big theater :) thank you so much Khalid
and i like the fact that you also involved in Arabic literature ...

[khalid]

my pleasure..sure im involved in arabic literature and i have alot of writings in arabic as well but i dont post them here..

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

yes , sure you don't :) well, me too i write more in Arabic , and i think i am a way better in Arabic, i can express more , and honestly i am trying to publish a book inshallah :)

[khalid]

inshallah. i hope you get the best..

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

thank you :) if you may would you send one of your Arabic writings in msg to me ??

[khalid]

what type do you like?

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

poetry , khwater :)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

he was a false champion
behind the scenes there is reflection
of another life , another me
and in that play i was the victim ....

Nicely written.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Wow!!! This analogy of a play and how it seems, the world..our world...the people in it....just how I often think and ponder about...

genuine and true people sure are rare....

Thanks for writing this :D

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

oh you are so welcome :)
its something i also often think about , its a strange life :)

[Jordan's Back]

This is a powerful Deep Write. Easily Relatable..

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

thank you :)

[Jordan's Back]

Always

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

:)

[Frieda P]

I like this, betrayl portrayed on stage. It's clever and a good read. Nice.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

thank you :)

[revalatia]

eerie.. lovin it

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

thank you :) glad you loved it ...

[Jeff]

Awesome work. I was unsure of what I wad going to read. You wrote a wonderful poem.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you Jeff i am glad you liked it ^_^

[Jeff]

You're welcome!

[once upon a time]

I really enjoyed reading this. All of your work so far has been really good! Great job!

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

ohhhhhhhhh , thank you so much i appreciate your opinion ^___^

[rnuff]

This is really amazing, such depth.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

thank you :) i appreciate your opinion

[Neha]

That's superb. You have depicted the feelings very effectively. Kudos! Keep it up. Giving 90/100 (90 because it needs some editing) :)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

thank you so much , i appreciate your opinion
about editing , well my English is not perfect but i am trying though :)