River (Draft 2)

Track 2 draft lyrics of the project that I'm working on.

Awake and 

Incomplete

I float up stream

No need to move

I'm guided by land

The sky above

Silent sun shines

Radiant humility

Spirits chirp and sing

Croak and hum and 

Howl--

A chaotic harmony

Lazy reflections ripple

Skyward evergreens

Sway in time to

Wind's strong subtlety 

Creaking

Snapping and 

Sliding to the river. . . 

Wise Sturgeon moves slow 'n silent

Raven flies between realms 'n beyond 

Awake and 

Now complete

I float down stream

Open lake awaits to cross

At River's surface end. . .

Reviews

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

A good poem. With wishes.

[Popble]

This sounds like a dream, peaceful and relaxing. Very good poem