Andai Kau Pergi

 

Wajahmu

Sayu senyumanmu

Di sebalik mindaku

Menusuk kalbu

Rinduku membara...

  

Sayangku

Andai kau pergi

Aku tetap menunggumu

Menanti sepanjang hayatku

Hingga akhir hayatku...

  

Begitulah cintaku

Bak seputih salju

Biarpun badai datang menghempas

Hatiku seteguh batu...

 

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A soft smile

Upon your face

An image in my mind

It pierces my heart

As I miss you so much

 

 

My love,

If you leave me

I will wait for you

I will wait for you for the rest of my life

Till my last breath

 

 

That is my love for you

As white as snow

Eventhough the storm crashes through

My heart remains as firm as stone

 

Reviews

[Rockebah]

My first reaction to this was "WHAT"? Then i noticed there was an English version so thats good. You're attracting two variety of audience. That's smart. The poem was sweet although I felt more feelings or emotions could have been brought into it. But overall its good