Kill the Pirates.

Kill the Pirates.

A Poem by Rufio The Jedi

Kill the Pirates.

 

We are lost boys

We are virgins

We are lovers

In our eyes we hold still the innocence of lust

The girls that kill the pirates

We chase

In their hands

We climb

Limbs quivering

Carried into a room

Dimmed to the scent of nectarines

We bite the silver

That lines their thighs

And blame it on our wild hearts

© 2009 Rufio The Jedi


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We are lost boys

We are virgins

We are lovers
In our eyes we hold still the innocence of lust
The girls that kill the pirates
i love it
every line were majestic as hell
a great piece
-tumi

Posted 5 Months Ago


having been both a lost boy and a pirate (though never a virgin), I say hoist the jolly roger and give the girls some gum drops...well done, and then some...

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Avas ye scurvy naives!!! Scoundrels and wenches for everyone!!! HURRAH! HURRAH! HURRAH!!
Emily Burns sent me here and I am glad she did. This poem starts-off all sweet with intimations of virgins and lost boys, but this poem is pure aggression on several levels. From frivolity to sex! and I like it!! NICE!

Posted 15 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this poem makes me feel dirty..I must bathe now..though I doubt it will help.

Posted 15 Years Ago


0 of 3 people found this review constructive.

This is amazing. Absolutely innocent and wide-eyed and wonderful. It's an instant favorite. One to come back to on wild heart days.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this poem, and I haven't a clue why.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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