Tears

Tears are sweeter than smiles

for it symbolizes love

not to everyone nor to everything

but to someone who is special

words are never been enough

to tell you i love you

words are never been enough

to tell you how much i really do

If i could just ask cupid

to shoot you with his magical arrow

i'll sail the whole world

just to catch him

if i could just

i will do it

even if it cost my life

for i love you

Reviews

[zainul]

A lovely note in favor of love.
Thanks for sharing.:)

[ForTheWorld]

thank you :)

[zainul]

You are most welcome.

[Chris Lotus]

This is definitely something I could relate to. As Wolf mentioned, I'm not too clear as to why the use of the word "are". Could have been a typo or you may be onto something we aren't getting/seeing. That's really the only thing that was a little off to me. Keep at it!

[The Lone Wolf Prose]

A very sad poem. I found in reading though there was a bit of an off-center feel. Wasn't sure if you purposefully used "are" in the lines "words are never been enough" as if you were emphasizing the feeling of being in a lose but I would suggest maybe reworking that. Try using the physical structure of the poem as well...that might help in the phrasing of the poem to give it a more jagged feel or flow. This has some potential. I would really like to see what you do with it if you were to make some changes. Keep working!