Crystal Heart

fragile heart,, catch it forme

Crystal Heart
Full of cracks
Souvenirs from the past
Scars of falling apart

all this years
I'm searching
for the one true love
Destined to be mine forever

How i wish i could find him
Now or sooner
Cause i don't want to fall again
on the wrong one

I'll be tired of loving again
waiting him to come
catch my crystal heart
that its now falling apart

Author's Note

don't mind the colors, it's one of my trips when i wrote this poem, hahahahahhaha,, ^^v

...tell me what do you think please

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

Think the format is great also the piece torn between being love and true love is one hell of a dilemma.
Excellent write.

[Andrew Wright]

I know that ache well; the emotion here was hard to miss. Reading this is a great experience.

[Linear]

Oh and I love the colours

Brilliant

[Linear]

It is a very sweet poem, some errors in grammar, but english is not your first language.
All in all a wonderful poetic effort
Enjoyed :0)

[Sam Severn]

Your yearning in this poem touches my heart. Thank you for writing this!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a lovely poem. It is sad but romantic in the most powerful way.
May the flames of passion repair this cracked heart ...
to be stronger than ever before.

[TJ]

We can all relate to that endless search for 'the one' and the weariness it brings. Maybe we should sit back and let that one find us :)

[Ruth]

Beautiful!
So emotive love..such searching pays off...if the other realises how fragile a heart can be xx