Hurts

How could you say you love me

While your always hurting me

Slicing my heart

Doing everything to hurt my feelings

Jealousy covered my heart

Anger for you rose

I wanna hurt you

But I just can't

I don't know why

I want to kill you

I want to hurt you too

But i know i can't

Because i know you won't be hurt

And why?

Because you don't love me

You love my best friend instead

And it hurts!

Author's Note

please ignore the bad grammars!!! =D thanks =D

Reviews

[Aline S. Iniestra]

Aww I know the feeling, nothing good of course. Better to unleash the anger and sadness this way and never dowrong to others. Beautifully written dear. Exlicit, to the point and the right words. =)

[MAC]

what a gritty poem about the hurtside of love? is it love if it doesn't feel like it or look like it? and could he be your true love if he doesn't truly love you. excellent write!!

[Ruth]

Hurt I would imagine is an understatement! This is raw love and well versed! Things like this always need to be purged, hugs xx

[Robert Anderson]

aww i can sense your anger and wanting answers in this piece. an emotive expression!

[Mauricio Montoya]

great job, well done.

[Jonathan]

Ahhh that one hurt me what a sad twist
Don't let that hurt your friendship though.

[JENY]

wow...
that is good...
so touching...
and so funny too....
some people....are never hurt by anybody or anything.......
some other people...are hurt by somebody else...always...

[Thea Fuentebella]

ooh. speedy and wicked poem. nice!

[Ashesh]

liked the ending.. a twist in a tale! .. keep writing and sharing.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Oh wow. This is some powerful emotional purging.
Your words really got to me.