Flower and Life

..it's the reason why life wanted to b a flower from the very start

Flower and Life

 

The sunshine dancing while the wind is blowing

The simply sweet and beautiful flowers

The flower that could amaze everyone while blooming

The one smiling to their passers and bystanders

 

The colorful ocean of flower valley

Elegant features of an awfully nice flower

The reason why the sun never gets weary

 

The hope that the Earth still has colors

The reason of life why he wants to be a flower

The life full of comedy, no horrors

The life consisting of laughter and no sobers

Author's Note

..it is actually our assignment in English, our teacher let us do some thrilling poem using figure of speech and it really did hurt my mind..

Reviews

[Ashesh]

lively and vibrant. nice one.

[Omar Fendri]

so optimistic, sanguine and cheerful ... your words are just so zestful and simple... I like the way you use the vocabulary of the nature... well-written

[Mauricio Montoya]

Flower power brings joy to life and here you’ve convey that/
Excellent write.

[Ruth]

We always have to have that hope love, as always, you paint such a decorative scene, that is part of your talent! You can take a scene and paint it with awesome vivdness! Amazing love xx

[Sam Severn]

I love how the poem FEELS like a dance, like the swirling spirit of wind-blown flowers dancing! And verse 2 is EXTREMELY BEAUTIFUL!!! ㋡

[Cynthia]

I am jealous! Why do your teacher let you write poems, while my teacher only let me write essay? Just kidding, but really, it'l cool!
I love this poem really much, you make life precious through it.
Amazing!