Heartless

A call on the phone
A simple song
Playing on the radio
Connected on the stereo

How i wish i could hear your voice
laughing the same way as i you heard before
wish i could see your smile
the smile that could make me melt

Wish i could hear you
call my name
wish i could tell you
i love you again

but now your gone
buried six feet under the ground
living me alone in this world
heartless

Author's Note

..heartless...i don't know where i picked that word, all i know is it popped on my mind that fast..hope you like it...=D

Reviews

[Aline S. Iniestra]

Very dark and sad, and so beautiful. Loved it!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem is one that I can certainly relate to. There is a song by
Alice in Chains called "Down In A Hole" that really got me through a tough
time. "I'd like to fly....by my wings have been so denied"

This is touching work.

[Jonathan]

Truly a heart felt poem can't say I can relate to it
But never the less strong emotions are well invested
In this poem. Well done.

[Cynthia]

Its really sad, losing someone we love and its another thing! Its death, not apart :( Its really.. heart breaking! I can relate to this poem really much, and you captured a strong, powerful feeling/emotion in the poem as well!

A Great, deep, powerful poem, over all, I love it really much!

[Mauricio Montoya]

It is heartfelt and sad to long for someone when all you have left are memories, it’s simply things we miss. In many ways I can relate to this piece, I think you’ve done a great job. Thank for sharing.

[Jasmine]

you've captured tangible emotion here. it's a little clichéd, if I'm, honest, but it's hard not to be in today's world, after millions of poems previously exploring human emotion. well done.

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

very sad poem but somehow has touch my emotions that aches too...incredible expression of emotions...i almost cry reading this poem:(....but always remember that in every hurting we experienced there will always be happiness hoping to felt...hope and have faith:)

[YouoweYoupay]

This is sad. The death of a friend or a loved one breaks us and we take time to bring back the pieces again. I'm sorry.