Promenade!!!

Promenade!!!

A Story by ForTheWorld
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...It's when he asks you to be his first dance on the prom...

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It's when he holds your hands and ask you for a dance in the middle of the dark dance floor with the colorful glimmering lights on. It's when he holds your waist then started to move with you while the music is on. It's when he tells you sweet nothings just to make you smile when you feel awkward because of the people around you.It's when he looks at you in the eye and then you feel like melting, your knees are shaking. It's when he smiles at you and you feel like you two are the only people existing. It's when he gave you flowers then proclaim his love to you; you feel like your the luckiest girl on earth. It's when he asks you to be his first dance on the prom...

© 2011 ForTheWorld


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Posted 13 Years Ago


The prom is a important time for young people. We need to dance and sing when youth is our strength. A excellent poem. Description and story was outstanding. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


I LOVE the whole story! Its short and clean but just so sweet! The story make me all dreaming after all! I love the imagery of this story, without it, it will be lots different. I love this story!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 17, 2011
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ForTheWorld
ForTheWorld

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A Story by ForTheWorld